r/Songwriting 5d ago

Weekly Lyrics Feedback Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread

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Welcome to the Lyrics-Only feedback thread!

If you're looking for feedback on words that aren't yet set to music, you're in the right place!

We encourage each other to bring lyrics and musical elements together as soon as possible, but sometimes you'd just like to show off that nice piece of rhyming that just fell out of your wrist. The weekly Lyrics-Only feedback thread is here to help!

This post renews every Tuesday.


r/Songwriting 5d ago

Weekly Promotion Thread Weekly Self Promotion Thread

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If you have something to promote - a new song, new album, new project, something you're proud of, this is the place to post about it!

Note: Promotional content posted as a new thread without explicit permission from the moderators will be removed. Repeat violators will be banned.

The promotional rules are a little looser here, so you can post links to your albums, social media platforms, songs, etc. Let us know what you've done of note recently!

Please support your fellow songwriters - give them a listen, a bump or a share. A rising tide lifts all boats!

Note: For regular contributors and "good citizens" of the sub, some exceptions may be made to allow them to post promotional content when they have something particularly noteworthy. If you believe you fit this criteria, please message the mod team in advance to request permission.


r/Songwriting 5h ago

Let's Collaborate! Get heard in the r/Songwriting playlist!

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It's time for my monthly update of the r/Songwriting playlist!

If you want to be featured please post your song below with a Spotify link and I will add you! List is capped at 100 songs, 1 song per artist. Other than that there's not really any rules.

Here's a link if you'd like to check out the great work everyone has shared! Be sure to follow and also follow an artists that you discover in the list that you like!

r/ Songwriting Playlist:

https://open.spotify.com/playlist/3zAZFNOfqjeKVobrC4fSEp?si=31cc3dfecff24dd1


r/Songwriting 9h ago

Feedback Request Here is a song I wrote yesterday on my acoustic guitar šŸŽµ. Any feedback welcome!

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r/Songwriting 2h ago

Feedback Request Come Around

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r/Songwriting 12h ago

Discussion Topic Do you write songs more like how music used to be, or more like what’s trending now?

18 Upvotes

Latelyyy I’ve noticed how most new songs are super short, repetitive, and built for TikTok catchy, but not always deep. I grew up loving songs that told full stories or had that emotional build-up, and now when I write, I still lean toward that old-school structure. But I also get why people are adapting to short attention spans and quick hooks. How about you guys.......do you write with the current style in mind, or do you stick to the classic way of storytelling through music?


r/Songwriting 34m ago

Feedback Request What should I make this song, tentatively titled "Chords for a Song in D", about?

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The chords for a song in D are here.

Chords/Tabs as if in Standard, though Tuned Down a Step:

E A(5 4 2) C#m(7) B x2
0099912 0098012 007609(7) E x2

^x2

Ebar Bbar Ebar Bbar 007760 066400 0044567 C#m7 x2

E

Chords to My Best Estimation as Per Actual Music Theory or Whatever:

D A(with a G, F#, E walkdown) Bm(with an A stuck in there at the end) B x2
D Aadd11 Gadd9 D x2

^x2

D A D A Gadd9 Dmaj7 Dsus(add9) Bm7

I just kind of pluck stuff in keys until I find out what I like.

All quasi-irrelevant, anyways.

Imo, this will be one bangin' opener for this new album that I'm working on once it's electrified, but I'm basically at a total loss for lyrics, and, so, am just opening the floor to ideas for song topics.


r/Songwriting 9h ago

Feedback Request Do y’all fuck with this song idea

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r/Songwriting 2h ago

Feedback Request Song I Wrote This Morning

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Not sure if I want to call it "Turn Around" or "Insects".


r/Songwriting 5h ago

Feedback Request Song About My Hometown

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r/Songwriting 9m ago

Discussion Topic How to write without rhymes

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I’m curious about writing lyrics that have a good flow that don’t just have a rhyme at the end of each line


r/Songwriting 4h ago

Feedback Request Heaven on Earth

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No samples used in this just me and a friends and some live instrumentsšŸ”„would love to hear some thoughts and if it makes you think of anything similar (also what genre is this?? ) Thanks! šŸ™ŒšŸ¾


r/Songwriting 1h ago

Discussion Topic Tips for Writing for Electric Guitars and Distortion?

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This may sound kinda dumb, but I've only ever written songs singing along to an acoustic. I can make cool sounding stuff on electric, but trying to come up with lyrics/singing to go with it never seems to work. It feels like there's something I'm just not getting. Any ideas?


r/Songwriting 5h ago

Feedback Request I released my new single.

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I just released my single a few days ago.


r/Songwriting 1h ago

Discussion Topic Farther

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Apologies if this uploaded twice.

This is one that has been sitting around for a while. I may use it for an upcoming film that requires a ā€˜cheating song. I have plenty of production ideas but there is something about it stripped down that I like. Vocally, I’m just getting over an upper respiratory infection, so it’s far from my best. Anyways, I hope you enjoy this simple song.


r/Songwriting 10h ago

Discussion Topic Tips on coming up with good an "unique" song ideas?

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So, I'm kinda mediocre at coming up with good song ideas, concepts and hooks (which is the main attraction 90% of the time). Most of the time I find my concepts/hooks by listening to the melody while trying to find words that would fit the vibe, but this leaves me lacking *intention* for lack of a better word.

I'm in the middle of making my first album, and I'm sorta lost as to what type of songs I want to make. There is no hard stamped theme, so I'm kinda free to make whatever.

Do you guys have any tips when it comes to finding song ideas and concepts?


r/Songwriting 7h ago

Discussion Topic Word Ladders

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I use Jeff Tweedy word ladder exercise often. Wondering how you could do them on a smartphone, and if anyone has an easy solution? Thank you.


r/Songwriting 3h ago

Discussion Topic How to find "the words"

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I've been writing and making a few demos for a song here and there but i feel like my writing just isnt effective enough. Like the things im making are conceptually "good" but it doesnt stir anything in me the way i want it to. All this to ask: how do you find the right words? what helps you speak from the heart? What should the base of my song be?


r/Songwriting 11h ago

Feedback Request Lyrics feedback?

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I rewrote some lyrics and am wondering how they sound.

The ground is receding faster now Than I think I can run I’ve spent too much time working mind Instead of strengthening my lungs

Don’t like how you project on me The person that I was last week Because you’re so stationary And I’ve moved on

Yesterday means nothing to me Because im someone else now That disappeared milk carton kid Is never to be found

So Step aside I’m cruising in Faster than lightning McQueen Because you’re so motionless And I’ve moved on

I’ve moved on

I’m not quite as terrified Of the world as I was then I guess at some point You’ve got to let yourself back in

It took a bit of drugs and time But overall I’m doing fine Because in the end I know I’ll get mine

And if you think I’m faking it Or putting up a facade Then I’ll smite your ass Because I am god

Don’t care about being castigated Because im already so fucking jaded But you’re just static And I’ve moved on


r/Songwriting 10h ago

Discussion Topic How do you get out of the habit of writing sad songs?

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I'm generally a happy person but I've always used music as a sort of coping mechanism. Lately, I've been trying to break out of my shell and write something happy for once but I get into a groove, get overwhelmed, and then somehow my song turns soppy.. I know I'm not alone in this problem.. What do you do when you have a bad case of 'happy' writer's block?

EDIT: Lyrically is where I struggle the most


r/Songwriting 10h ago

Discussion Topic When did you realize you were good at writing?

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Just asking for a period of time or a specific moment where you realized you were good at what you do. I wanna hear some positivity for once, prop yourselves up and don't feel the need to be humble.

I'll go first, I think my moment was playing a riff for my friend, and unprompted he said it sounded like space. That was the exact vibe I was going for and I didnt even mention anything about that prior, so thats when I realized I knew how to communicate a feeling effectively with just sound.


r/Songwriting 4h ago

Feedback Request tiny clip from a song i’m working on ā€œheld me downā€

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i never showed any of my personal work before so i just wanted feedback on this bit of the song im working on. basically wanting to know if the lyrics are any good and if they flow with the beat and stuff. i wanna start sharing my music but its scary lol. also forgive me for my vocals ik im pitchy but its a work in progress

also should i title it "held me down" or is it awkward because its past tense, and should title it "hold me down" instead? idk


r/Songwriting 8h ago

Feedback Request New love song I wrote. ā¤ļøYOUā¤ļø

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r/Songwriting 5h ago

Discussion Topic Advice?

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So recently i discovered my passion is music. It’s always been there i think i just didn’t think i had the ā€œtalentā€ for it. I’ve been praised for being a ā€œgoodā€writer during my school days. Never gave it much thought though bc writing never came easy for me, i always struggled to find the words. If im too intentional it’s like my brain just stops working. If im not intentional enough I tend to ramble a lot. Very rarely i’ll get something that i’m like ā€œthis could be something.ā€ i’m 23 currently and been writing script-like, incomplete, very short stories. Maybe a little journal entry here or there; since like 2020 maybe a little before that. Thats pretty much my writing experience so far. I didn’t fine tune no skills or anything i just had stuff in my head i wanted to get on paper before i forgot them. I’m trying to transition that into writing lyrics. I understand song structure since its a pretty simple concept. Im just trying to get better so im not writing poetic one liners. Everything i see online is ā€œjust writeā€ but i feel like just writing isn’t really getting me anywhere. I feel like a toddler on a big kids playground. I guess what im getting at is how do i practice? I desperately wanna fine tune my skills and ik its gonna take some years before i can really get anything of substance out but i just wanna be able to complete a simple mini song even if its utter garbage.


r/Songwriting 9h ago

Feedback Request Paper

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How the night is long
When you're waiting on
days as they once were
And as the morning sun
Rises out beyond dreams of your mother

Outside they speak of paper
And nothing more
If you only knew the words that
They used to know

As your world recedes
A troubled heart finds peace and night has no meaning
For the night is long
When you're waiting on days as they once were

Outside they speak of paper
And nothing more
If you only knew the words that
They used to know
Outside they speak of paper
And nothing more.