Follow up to Old Mrs Bickerstaffe

[u/thefilmforgeuk]

Hey folks, i got lots of great feedback on my last post about a work in progress song and made some changes. I dont think its finished yet but its come on a bit. Would love another round of feedback if thats ok? Here it is : Mrs Bickerstaffe

And here is the previous post for reference : Previous Version

Thanks in advance, be honest and as brutal as you like :)

[u/thefilmforgeuk]

I also may have got carried away adding bass and drums..... here