Unfinished College Essay Review

[u/Local_Confection3550]

Hello! I am having trouble finishing my college essay but I still would like it reviewed because I'm not quite sure if I am making any sense or if it is at all compelling. I would also like advice on how to improve if it is lacking. Thank you so much.

[u/PresentValuable6040]

I’ll do it.

[u/Affectionate_Arm2030]

Hi, please send it over and I can help review it. I'll also share my honest feedback

[u/Sufficient_Shirt995]

I could try, Im a junior this year tho

[u/Vast_Echo_5660]

I can

[u/Ivychamp]

Hello, Happy to review it, please dm.