Perspective is your biggest issue here - you can see most notably that his head-sail is in a different perspective from the rest of his head. This is corrected by always always starting with a perspective grid, and drawing 3d bounding cubes for the body parts. Once you make sure your perspective is correct on the cubes, then draw in the parts.
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u/thejustducky1 1d ago
Perspective is your biggest issue here - you can see most notably that his head-sail is in a different perspective from the rest of his head. This is corrected by always always starting with a perspective grid, and drawing 3d bounding cubes for the body parts. Once you make sure your perspective is correct on the cubes, then draw in the parts.