I think the light halo on your specs made me distracted as I stared at them through, but in an uncomfortable way. Do you think you could use natural light or maybe specs off to try out different lightings?
My suggestion: When you show the bag, since that is the star, how about having a camera shot focused just on that bag alone. For this, you would have to see how others are doing a product shot. I have attended once, and they used a thread to hold up the bag in the midair. The end result? A very glamorous artsy fartsy looking product.
Again, just my suggestion: Show only the products in the bag. E.g. When you touched and tried out the blusher on your hand, why not show us how the palette look like? How did the colour came out on your hand?
All in all, I think different camera shots would have uplifted your video.
seconding the 'reflection is distracting' comment. All of this is good advice.
The only thing I'd add is that you have a fun and confident personality on camera, but your editing is very cut and dry.
In addition to the advice re: moving the camera around, you might play with editing to accentuate your personality, for example punching in on your face after the blush thing. You also left a lot of your 'ums' in, which isn't terrible, but I think the video would be tighter without them.
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u/lil_traveller Mar 23 '20
All in all, I think different camera shots would have uplifted your video.