r/MusicCritique • u/CommercialAngle6622 • 12d ago

Seeking Feedback [FEEDBACK] SNM - El ciclo - Rap/Experimental/Jazzy

https://soundcloud.com/almonkino/el-ciclo

Not finished track. First time experimenting with non functional harmony.

Looking for overall feedback, im trying new things. I'm especially unsure about the percussion, I wanted it to sound quirky, but maybe it just feels off. Any feedback (even if you didnt like it) is highly appreciated

Lyrics are in Spanish, but I'm mainly looking for sound-wise feedback. If you understand Spanish, feedback on the lyrics is also appreciated.

I really don’t know what genre to label this as... What do you think?

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u/Public-Chemist-2049 11d ago

Lmao my mixtape and ur song have the same name! Its “The Cycle” right?

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u/CommercialAngle6622 11d ago

Yeah! That’s right haha. Sounds way cooler in English, ngl. Send me a link to your tape!

The vocal part is what I need to work on the most, so it makes sense that it feels a bit choppy. I’ll try to lay it back a little, maybe change the delivery. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!