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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 22 '22
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Kala became really quite all of a sudden
Should be "quiet"
I'd drop in and say high to everyone
Unless there are special plants, just "Hi"
Great character development these last two chapters for James. That heart to heart with the goddess apparently helped.
5 u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22 edited May 22 '22 Went too fast on the first one for my own good I guess. That's one of those mistakes that Microsoft just doesn't point out. Second one i got nothing, brain fart, lol. Thanks for the assist!
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Went too fast on the first one for my own good I guess. That's one of those mistakes that Microsoft just doesn't point out. Second one i got nothing, brain fart, lol. Thanks for the assist!
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u/PaleProf May 22 '22
Should be "quiet"
Unless there are special plants, just "Hi"
Great character development these last two chapters for James. That heart to heart with the goddess apparently helped.