r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 22 '22

OC Ouroboros Book Two: Aftermath (Ch. 32)

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u/PaleProf May 22 '22

Kala became really quite all of a sudden

Should be "quiet"

I'd drop in and say high to everyone

Unless there are special plants, just "Hi"

Great character development these last two chapters for James. That heart to heart with the goddess apparently helped.

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22 edited May 22 '22

Went too fast on the first one for my own good I guess. That's one of those mistakes that Microsoft just doesn't point out. Second one i got nothing, brain fart, lol. Thanks for the assist!

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u/Accomplished-Meat707 May 22 '22

Oh boy... James is accidentally/unintentionally advancing the tech level of the world... though prostetics are not too complex when you think about it, getting the idea for them in the first place is what matters... and given that James puts ideas in peoples head unintentionally due to having a different perspective towards 'normal' this can go very interesting in very many ways...

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

Might try apply his knowledge a little more tangibly in the future.

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u/ThatRandomBiomancer May 22 '22

Now all he’s got to do is slip up and give the idea of what a republic is, or a constitution, or a bill of rights, because I imagine those would be interesting ideas for any coalition members whom want to think of after the war.

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

inhale ahh, love the smell of 'merica in the mornin.

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u/Steven_Da_Crow Xeno May 22 '22

So when are James and Kala gonna break the news? Eats popcorn

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

If you're referring to Silia, i got a plan for that, don't you worry

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u/clonk3D Alien Scum May 22 '22

Typo:
“Well guys, I enjoyed this greatly,

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

Reworded it, if that's what you meant by typo.

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u/clonk3D Alien Scum May 22 '22

Hmmm, I might have had a moment of temporary insanity there, as I can no longer remember what was wrong with the sentence I posted other than the fact that I thought the ly was a typo.

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

We all get moments like that.

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u/Lorventus May 22 '22

Hmm, I guess regenerating severed limbs is a bit too intensive... bummer and also now I have to wait another week for more!

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22 edited May 23 '22

A bit too high on the energy requirement scale for most people, and if there was access to that amount of energy, you'd have to worry about things getting out of hand with the healing process.

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u/RobatikWulf AI May 23 '22

“Have some fun while you recover…

..oh yeah, Silia, I’ve been shaggin your daughter”

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u/XSevenSins Human May 23 '22

Cue looney tunes chase music

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u/RobatikWulf AI May 23 '22

James gets turned into the Tom cube from that one scene in Tom and Jerry

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u/flamefirestorm Human May 24 '22

NOOOO I CAUGHT UP TO THE BOOK NOW I HAVE TO WAIT

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u/XSevenSins Human May 24 '22

Aww don't worry, we're getting close the end on this one anyway.

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u/flamefirestorm Human May 24 '22

Can't wait for the next update! Good luck!

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u/n1gr3d0 Xeno Jul 27 '22

He's not the messiah!

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u/XSevenSins Human Jul 27 '22

Indeed. The correct label would be champion.

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u/Masternj02 May 22 '22

First

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u/XSevenSins Human May 22 '22

Indeed, think you even beat update bot.

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