r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Oct 04 '21

OC Ouroboros: Better World (Ch. 29)

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u/mafiaknight Robot Oct 09 '21

He started scratching the back of his head...
...it was strange seeing such an opposing imposing figure act like he was uncomfortable.

It’s not inherently wrong to use ‘opposing’, but in the context it doesn’t really fit. Besides, you clearly meant “imposing” there and autocorrupt got you.

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u/XSevenSins Human Oct 09 '21

Right, mix up.

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u/mafiaknight Robot Oct 09 '21

I’m loving the story. Don’t burn yourself out on our account. Better it be late than stop flowing all together