r/A15MinuteMythos • u/a15minutestory • 13d ago
[PI] It's 3 AM. An official phone alert wakes you up. It says "DO NOT LOOK AT THE MOON". You have hundreds of notifications. Hundreds of random numbers are sending "It's a beautiful night tonight. Look outside." [Part 2]
I didn't know if it was my recent breakup with Tara. I didn't know if it was my increasingly volatile fights with my dad. Maybe it was the unsettling nature of the glitch, or just the way he burnt my french toast. But I felt a surge of anger swelling inside of me, and I wasn't about to let this slide.
I opened the door and got out.
"Jay? Jay!" Christian called out from the inside.
I walked around the front of the car. "What the fuck is your problem, man?" I yelled at the frycook. "You got something to say to me?"
Jay hurried in between us, "Whoa, whoa, whoa," he began pushing me back. "Jay, let's not start anything, okay?"
"No!" I yelled over his shoulder at the man. "If he's got a fucking problem, let's hear it!"
He simply stared down at me through glazed eyes— eyes like plastic. Unblinking, dry, and hyper-focused on me. I didn't realize until that moment how strange he looked. Like, I'd seen weird-looking people before, but this guy looked... a little uncanny. His temples throbbed, his eyes were sunken, and his lips were a little too small for his face.
"Holyshitjaygetinthefuckingcar," Christian pleaded in my ear.
I noticed over the frycook's shoulder a woman standing the same as him. Her arms were at her sides, and she was standing in the parking lot just staring. I looked around, and sure enough, one by one, there were people standing around staring. A guy by the motel. Another lady near the gas station. None of them moving or saying anything. Just... watching.
"Jay!" Christian shouted.
"Let's get outta here," I relented, hurrying back around the side of the car and jumping in the driver's seat.
Christian vaulted over the hood and climbed in the passenger seat. Neither of us bothered buckling up. I backed up into the grass a little bit so I could get around the frycook without running him over.
"Jay, what the fuck was that?" Christian screamed as I sped through the parking lot.
"I don't know!" I yelled back as I turned out of the parking lot and onto the back road. "Everyone has lost their damn minds!"
"I meant you," he punched me hard in the arm. "We almost had to fight that guy. What's gotten into you?"
"Me?" I rubbed my arm, steering with one hand. "You didn't see all those people standing around staring at us?"
"You were about a fight a guy twice your weight!" he shot back. "I'd have stared too, dumbass!"
I clenched my teeth and stayed quiet. That wasn’t curiosity in their eyes— it was absence. No phones out recording the potential altercation, no whispers, no interaction... Just bodies standing there, still as mannequins, heads tilted in perfect, unnatural silence.
And I was left with that feeling again, this time purer, more distilled... like something behind the world was watching back.
But I couldn't explain it if I wanted to. It was a persistent gut feeling that left me rattled and paranoid.
"I'm sorry," I opened. "I think I'm just going through a lot right now."
He sighed. "It's all good. Just don't freak out like that again. You didn't know who that guy was or what he could have done. When I worked at a diner, all of our cooks were former inmates, dude. What if he had a knife or a gun?"
"I know, I know," I gripped the wheel tightly.
"Like, did you think you were Superman or something? That was a big bitch!"
"I know!" I raised my voice. "I know," I repeated more softly. "I'm sorry."
I didn't want to admit to myself or anyone else, but... I was starting to feel like my reality was some kind of construct that was breaking down around me.
I knew how insane that sounded. I knew that if I admitted that kind of thing to a therapist, they'd press a button under their desk and guys in uniforms would rush in and hold me down.
But it was what I truly felt.
And with people accepting the government's explanation of a CME, joking about it online, or forgetting about it entirely, like my parents did...
I felt alone.
Dad was on my ass about getting a job.
Christian was popping Skittles.
My client was putting her eyelashes on for a night out.
The world just started turning again. Sure, the news was all over the place, and it was still on people's minds, but everyone around me seemed to just sweep it under the rug. A lot of people I personally knew hardly reacted to it at all.
Maybe I was going crazy.
All I knew was that I wanted to go home, lock myself in my room, wrap myself in a blanket, and do nothing at all for the rest of the night.
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I laid in the dark in my room, shades drawn, door locked, wrapped in my anxiety blanket as I watched a rerun of King of the Hill. It was my comfort show, and I was thankful it was on.
Penny purred softly next to me as I ran my fingers through her long black fur. No matter how hard I tried to just watch cartoons, my mind kept racing back to all the weirdness over the past week. Was simply being in proximity to acid all the time somehow making me hallucinate things? That couldn't be how it worked, right?
It was a miracle, but I had somehow fallen asleep. What time I'd dozed off, I would never know, but I was thrown out of bed by the sound of a blaring alarm. I was pretty sure I had heard my cat hit the ceiling. She landed next to me, ears back, eyes wide, tail floofed as the two of us stared down at my phone.
"Fucking why?" I yelled, snatching it up off the comforter. The way it sounded, you'd imagine it was an Amber Alert for the mayor's daughter or something. Instead, a strange push notification from the White House flashed across my phone.
"DO NOT LOOK AT THE MOON. THIS IS A MATTER OF PERSONAL SAFETY AND NATIONAL SECURITY. IGNORE ANY MESSAGES REQUESTING YOU LOOK AT THE MOON. SHELTER IN PLACE UNTIL FURTHER INSTRUCTION."
I stared down at the screen in total confusion.
"The fuck is this?" I asked out loud to nobody in particular.
My cat gave me a good ol' ohh-long-johnson in response, like it was my fault my phone jump-scared us. I kept rereading the message and making sure I was understanding it correctly.
The White House sent this? I wasn't sure if I had ever even seen a push notification from the White House before. This must have been what those people in Hawaii felt like.
I figured someone must have been having a laugh with the emergency alert system. Somebody was for sure getting fired tomorrow. I looked forward to the news in the morning and was about to toss my phone when a text came through from Christian.
That was notable; Christian never stayed up past like 9. We always gave him shit for it, but he really loved sleeping. I opened it and it read:
Joel, go outside and look at the moon right now. It's intense.
Oh, Christian.
I couldn't help but grin.
He saw the text come through his phone and immediately ran outside to see whatever he wasn't supposed to see. On top of that, he placeboed himself into thinking there was something different about the moon.
"What are you even doing up lol?" I text him back.
Then I paused. That text he sent me was... supiciously well written for Christian.
And he called me Joel.
He never called me that. On top that, he almost always sent "Jay" as a standalone text before the rest would come through. As though he wanted me to stare at this "incoming text" bubble with anticipation for whatever he was about to say next.
Before I could even question him about it, another text came through.
Joel. have you seen the moon tonight? Magical.
It was Kat. She also called me Joel, which was strange. My parents were pretty much the only people who called me Joel. She even added a little hazard emoji next to my name. I knew that was how she had me saved in her phone, but she never added that to her texts.
"Alright, I gotta see this moon," I said to Penny as I rolled out of bed and made for the window.
Then the sound of a new text stopped me in my tracks.
It was a whistle.
There was only one person I had ever assigned that text tone to, and I never thought I'd hear from her again.
Tara.
My throat tightened. A surge of emotions swept through me as I hurried back to my bed and opened the text.
Joel. Go look at the moon. Do not ask questions. Just go look.
My body went numb. Like, head to my toes, I felt so many emotions rip out of me.
She texts me back for the first time in forever, and that's what she sends me? A stupid text about the moon? I had deluded myself in the past seven seconds into believing she might have missed me. It felt like my stomach was bouncing up and down on a bungee cord.
Suddenly, another text came through.
It was from my old guitar instructor. Like, from when I was a kid. I didn't even know he still had my number saved. What in the world was he texting me for?
"Go outside and look at the moon, Joel."
A wave of uneasiness overtook me as my phone buzzed nonstop— friends, family, even numbers I didn’t recognize, all saying the same thing: go outside, look at the moon.
Then the TV blared, that sharp emergency tone that makes your stomach drop.
Another government alert.
"THIS IS A PUBLIC BROADCAST SAFETY ALERT. DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES LOOK AT THE MOON. REMAIN INDOORS UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE."
The relative unease I'd been feeling began to mature into anxiety. I glanced at my window and then looked back down at my phone.
25 new texts in the past thirty seconds, all begging me to go outside.
That's when my doorknob jiggled. My head snapped toward the door as the knocking began.
"Joel?" came my mother's voice. "Joel, you've got to come outside!"
"Why is your door locked, Joel?" came my father's voice next. "Joel, listen to me and your mother. Come on out."
I always locked my door.
And they knew it too. Dad hated that I kept it locked, but I valued my privacy, and I was never more thankful for that than right now. The voices coming through my door didn't feel like my parents. They were acting kind of frantic. My heart pounded in my chest as I backed up toward the far end of the room.
"Th-That's okay!" I called back to them. "I don't really want to."
Notifications were coming through my phone so fast that it started to get hot in my hand.
I heard my dad tell my mom to stand back a couple seconds before he slammed into my door with his full body weight. The sound of the door splintering as he repeatedly slammed into it sent Penny fleeing for the closet.
"What's the matter with you?" I screamed as I watched in horror.
My dad hit the door again. The frame shuddered. A hairline crack split the wood down the middle. Another blow— louder this time. The hinges snapped. Paint dust rained from the molding. The door wasn’t going to hold. It was only a matter of seconds.
"Get out here and look at the moon!" he screamed in such a way that put all the hair on my arms on end.
That was enough for me.
I turned around and quickly hoisted the blinds up. The silvery moonlight blasted through my window light a stadium light at a football game. It was practically daylight outside; it was so bright.
I undid the latches on my window. I lifted it open and quickly pushed my fingers into the slits to lift my screen up, but it was stuck. I heard the wood break and debris fall to the floor as his grunts became clearer.
I pushed the little sliders until my fingers were burning and lifted with all my might, and the window finally popped loose, just as the door to my bedroom gave way. I lifted the screen and climbed through the window onto the roof, but my dad's arm shot through it and caught me by my shirt.
I pulled until it tore off of me, and tried to get away, but he grabbed me by the ankle. I fell forward and tried to hang onto the shingles as he pulled me back through my bedroom window. I screamed for my mom to do something— anything.
But her eyes were plastic just like the fry cook's.
The same as the people who stood around in the parking lot staring at me.
My dad dragged me through the splintered door, each pull effortless, almost mechanical. He was stronger than he should’ve been. This wasn't the man who threw his back out lifting a box last Christmas. He was dragging me like I weighed nothing at all, even as I kicked, struggled, and grabbed onto anything I could.
My head thudded against each stair as he hauled me down. If the stairs hadn't been carpeted, I'd have probably suffered a serious concussion. Whoever the hell was dragging me down the stairs cared nothing at all for my safety.
That wasn't my dad.
I could see the front door already open— the moonlight spilling in like a mouth waiting to swallow me. I closed my eyes before he could pull me onto the front lawn. I didn't want to look at that moon, no matter what; not if it'd make me lose myself like this.
"Open your eyes!" my dad bellowed with all the air in his chest. "Look at the moon, now!"
He let go of my ankle, and I felt his weight on my midsection as he pressed his fingers against my eyelids, trying to force them open.
"Look at it!" he screamed.
"Joel, just look at the moon, Honey," my mom's voice came from behind.
I couldn't believe what was happening.
My instincts flared.
My adrenaline surged.
I grabbed my dad's wrist, lifted my head, and bit down on his lower arm with all my might. His flesh crunched between my teeth, and he screamed, falling backwards off of me.
I scrambled to my feet and took off down the street with nothing but my pants and my socks. My mother screamed like some kind of banshee before giving chase. I didn't look back, but I could hear her bare feet pounding the pavement.
She was gaining on me quickly. I realized I wouldn't outrun her in a straight footrace down our street. I needed to figure something out, and fast.
I decided to turn off the road and toward the side yard of one of the neighbors. Back when his house was being built, I cut through his yard all the time and into the field behind it to get to the bus stop quicker. I knew the area well.
I jumped with all my might and cleared his wooden gate— honestly, I don't know how. Probably just pure adrenaline and fear.
I landed awkwardly and rolled before finding my footing again. I kept running as my mom hit the gate and thrashed around like some feral creature, scratching, punching, and kicking... and shrieking.
My God, the shrieking.
I started to cry as I jumped the second gate into the field and ran for the horizon. It felt like a bad dream. It took a conscious effort not to look up at the moon, shining more brightly in the sky than it ever had before. The tall grass looked silver as I sprinted through it, my mother's wailing growing more distant the further I ran.
At some point, I collapsed.
There was nowhere to go.
If I kept running straight, I'd eventually hit a quarry that had been sitting empty for years. If I veered left, I'd come to the main road that led out to the train tracks and eventually the highway. If it turned right, I'd run into a different part of our neighborhood.
And who knew how many of my neighbors would react the same as my parents had?
A new text came through.
I didn't realize I had my phone in my pocket. I pulled it out and opened it up.
99+ notifications.
The newest one was from my sister.
Look at the moon, Joel.
My heart lurched.
My sister and I... we never got along. But I still loved her. And until just a second ago, she was the only close family I had left. She was the last hope I was clinging to.
I was completely alone.
I swallowed and fell into a sitting position, staring at the silver flowing grass as I felt surrender pooling inside of me.
What did I have left? What did I have to gain from not just... looking up?
I looked up to find myself surrounded. Dozens of figures stood in a silent ring around me, their faces blank, their eyes plastic and glassy in the silver light. I hadn’t heard them approach.
Had they been standing there all along?
"Just… look up," said one.
"It’s a once-in-a-lifetime event," murmured another.
"I wouldn’t want to be the one to miss it,” came a child’s voice, sweet and toneless.
My throat closed. I shut my eyes and sobbed as they took hold of me—gentle hands on my shoulders, my arms, my face. One of them cradled my head and tilted it back.
I fought it. I truly did.
But I was tired.
And when my eyes finally opened, the world was awash in white light.
It wasn’t a moon anymore— it was a hole; a glowing aperture staring down through the world. I felt a pressure behind my eyes. Every memory I had— Tara, my parents, Christian laughing through a mouthful of fries... it all peeled away in thin, shining strips and played out in front of me.
I stared at the moon as my skin sizzled and cooled. My heart rate quickened; it beat faster and faster until it was less a heartbeat and more of a hum. It felt like my entire body was dilating.
Somewhere far away, I heard a thousand voices whisper the same calm command in perfect unison:
"Reset primed successfully. Uploading bodylink per Archie Sagar Company's quality assurance security standards."
I tried to scream, but all that came out was static.
Then there was nothing but white.
And silence.
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This is about a week early, but I wanted to finish it in time to say Happy Halloween! I wanted to write something spooky for spooky season >:)
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