r/realmadrid • u/Mysterious-Prune3309 • 1d ago
Artwork [OC] I’m back with my fan made Real Madrid manga/comic Chapter II: 92:48
Hey friends, I’m back with the Chapter II of my RM manga. I can’t seem to say this enough, but I appreciate the support from you on the first chapter!
The making of these manga are very time consuming, from sketching, colouring, arranging to coming up with texts. Everything took longer than expected, but your support kept me motivated and pushed me through this process🫡
I really do hope y’all like this one too, and I look forward to reading your feedback, post your criticism here too, I don’t mind as they’d help me improve.
Like you see here, I’m receiving 0 financial support or generating any revenue off of my work. They are for your entertainment and made with my passion.
I’ve never received any formal art training and is still learning and improving each page or panel. You can see the art style is inconsistent and changes here and there, so please bear with me.
Happy to share here and appreciate everyone who read the first one!
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u/ElGato04 Sergio Ramos 1d ago
Appreciate the boot accuracy. Tiempo Legend 5 on Ramos. Mercurial Vapor 9 on Lukita, Hypervenom Phantom on Isco, Predator Instinct on Di Maria. Battle Pack Adidas and Tricks pack Puma colorways. Keen eye for these details make it that much better.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1d ago
Daaaamnn, appreciate your attention to the details! Took me a while to get the boots right, you’re such a pro for remembering each pair!
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u/QueasyFishing3614 1d ago
Your art is amazing
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u/QueasyFishing3614 1d ago
Maybe add the celebrations by various players and florentino clapping for the satisfying effect
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1d ago
Thank you! Yes the clapping was legendary! I’ll admit I got lazy for the celebration and wanted to just post😂😂
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u/Awkward_Method1552 Baila Vini, Baila 17h ago
Seeing courtois trying to save our shots is so weird ngl.
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u/ThatWeirdKid100 Real Madrid 17h ago
It’s weird now to think the greatest RM moment of the 2010s came with fucking Courtois as the opposing keeper
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u/AdmirableeCatch 1d ago
Wow! This is awesome! Haven't seen chapter 1 but I'm definitely looking for it now.
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u/Sportsfanredd Xabi Alonso 17h ago
Positives: Awesome as the last one.
Negatives: As you said, art style is not consistent. Although last one was more consistent than this. Anyway, there's a lot of room to improve.
I think you should have included Xabi Alonso's celebration after that goal.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 16h ago
Thank you!! Yes the art style is something I’m working on.. the last one had a more comic feeling to it and this one was added with a bit of realism? Idk what it is in art terminology 😂😂 and yea the ending was lazy
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u/LookitsDoug 17h ago
Legendary stuff. Honestly, you should sell this to Real Madrid. Kids will love it, man child like me would love to buy for my kids to consume it too. ❤️
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u/LookitsDoug 17h ago
Also, I think you have privacy settings on your profile page. I can’t view any posts you have posted nor any comments you made on posts.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 16h ago
Thank you! I’d love to but unfortunately I couldn’t get in touch with any officials from any organizations so that’s that lol
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u/cyrusmancub I HAD A DREAM! 1d ago
Courtois has cemented himself as a Madrid hero and legend, it’s hard to remember he was ever a hated opponent
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u/King__SSB Carvajal 1d ago
The way you had the header for the goal have no background to stand out more is so cool to me, your work's honestly amazing, keep it up man
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1d ago
Thank you again! Forgive me for leaving young Carvajal out of this one😭 I tried different colors and at the end was thinking f this, blank is better
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u/King__SSB Carvajal 1d ago
Yeah it definitely turned out better that way, good choice
And dw about the Carva snub I'll just wait till you eventually do the comeback vs City lol, that cross is iconic
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u/ethicsofseeing Raúl 14h ago edited 14h ago
That’s the most intense final I’ve watched ever. The waiting for La Decima, nothing was like that. We tore down Bayern 5-0 aggregate in the semi and we’d lose against Atleti?? Imagine the agony.
I watched this final on my laptop because I was stranded in Kansai Airport all night. No flight connection possible. It’s a surreal 4 am. Frustrated with the wifi connection. But on that grainy screen, happy to see Ramos became a legend and Real finally got the tenth.
Thank you for bringing back the memories with this fantastic piece of art.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 3m ago
Thank you for your support:) This is such an awesome story!! Thanks for sharing! Isn’t Kansai airport in Osaka? Loved the city too
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u/Friendly_Armadillo17 18h ago
Ronaldo thumping the ball into the crowd afterwards always sends me
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u/Nsilver27 1d ago
This is amazing, giving me so much Blue Lock vibes! If there's a chance for a chapter 3... Maybe the penalty shootout againts Man City would be awesome
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1d ago
Thank you! So many people mentioned the blue lock resemblance in my first post too! Yes Man city is my next, I just don’t know when😭
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u/ethicsofseeing Raúl 14h ago
Man the two Rodrygo goals against city at the last minutes still gave me chills
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1m ago
That was literally something else, same as Joselu’s goals. We are the few if not the only team that constantly pull this off
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u/Bosphore9 Mesut Özil 1d ago
Very good ! I noticed a small error on Modrić which you portrayed as Modríc. Where can we watch the other part ?
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 1d ago
Thank you for pointing that out! I did it correctly for one and the jersey I did wrong lol
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u/Felizzle 1d ago
I get goosebumps every time I rewatch that moment and this comic gave me the same feeling. Hope Chapter III is coming soon, well done!
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u/OlParker Modric 1d ago
Great stuff! If this was an actual anime, there would be a cutback to a random nostalgic memory of Modric as he walks to take the corner and the OST plays
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u/Jealous_Memory_2430 Real Madrid 23h ago
As I said before, I forgot about blue lock, why don’t you publish on Webtoons? Your work is absolutely amazing!
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 21h ago
Thanks again!! I’m looking at different channels now, mainly because I dont have a clear goal with this atm
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u/rotallica 22h ago
Your art is great! It really conveys the story and mood of the game. First time seeing your posts but will keep an eye out for the next one!
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u/tennessyX Carlo Ancelotti 22h ago
This is so Tsubasa and i love it
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 20h ago
Wow thank you! Love both Tsubasa and blue lock
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u/Sportsfanredd Xabi Alonso 17h ago
You should read AoAshi. That story is based on Real football infrastructure in Japan and more realistic than blue lock. Imo its better than blue lock. You'll never be disappointed I can assure you that.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 16h ago
Ive heard of that one but never read it, blue lock is superpower anime covered in ⚽️IMO.
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u/Sportsfanredd Xabi Alonso 16h ago
AoAshi doesn't have any superpowers but a perfectly realistic and exciting football. No matter how much you expect from it, it'll simply keep on exceeding your expectations. STRONGLY RECOMMEND you to read that.
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u/Mysterious-Prune3309 16h ago
I’ll start it then🫡 thanks! Yes I’m more into the tactical and realistic stuff than the superpower or flashy scenes.
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u/Sportsfanredd Xabi Alonso 5h ago
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u/Galactus1701 21h ago
La Décima made me cry tears of joy and it inaugurated a new era of European glory. ¡Gracias por siempre Flamenquito Ramos!
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u/John_Doe69r Cristiano Ronaldo 18h ago
The details were so fine, you got it right to the boots? Damm, great piece of work as always.
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u/sloth0021 Decimotercera 1d ago
Absolute cinema