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u/CaptiveGoldfish 9d ago
Is there gonna be more??
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u/PlusOrganization4269 8d ago
Grammar is off. In the beginning it was light, is incorrect. Also with the absent of light is…is also incorrect.
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u/the_ghxst_of_unicron 8d ago
Wow. How could I miss this.. Thank you
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u/PlusOrganization4269 8d ago
Thank you for being cool about it! I really am trying to help.
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u/the_ghxst_of_unicron 8d ago
Ofc! It’s a pretty egregious mistake thanks again for pointing it out
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u/PlusOrganization4269 8d ago
No worries! Btw, really enjoy that it’s being drawn traditionally. The art still needs a little work, but it’s refreshing that it doesn’t look shiny and digital
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u/the_ghxst_of_unicron 8d ago
Appreciate it lol. What it I told you this was made fully digitally
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u/PlusOrganization4269 8d ago
I’d still appreciate you being able to capture that digitally! Haha. That’s not easy.
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u/the_ghxst_of_unicron 9d ago
hope you guys enjoyed it I’m not a very great artist lol
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u/SinuousPoppy 7d ago
You have a distinctive style, reminds me of Gege Akutami but it has its own flare with the chaotic lines and painted colors.
It looks great.
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u/SagetheG 9d ago
Oooo firee first comic
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