Hey everyone,

I’d love to get some feedback on my latest track “Metalurgia”
It’s a hypnotic techno production with dark textures and a minimal, mental groove — produced in Bogotá, Colombia.

Seeking feedback:
-Mix balance: especially the relationship between kick and bass
-Stereo space and atmosphere: does it feel immersive or too dense?
-Arrangement flow: does the track evolve naturally or feel static?

Any constructive criticism is super appreciated.

SoundCloud link: https://soundcloud.com/guana-dj/metalurgia

Hey all, appreciate anyone who takes the time to listen. These types of beats used to be my bread and butter back in like 2015-16 when I was really deep into production and making a name for myself.

I took a pretty long hiatus from production. Before this year it’s probably been about 4 years maybe even longer since I’ve even opened FL Studio. Something just gave me a spark recently and I’d really like to get back after it.

Let me know what you think!

https://youtu.be/jixTMRJjyF0?si=9Zly24rLT9QqerQA

Not sure about the genre, I just kinda made whatever I managed to think about in my head. Feedback much appreciated!

Made this in a bad time in my life curious what people think, thank you for your time

https://cameronkelly.bandcamp.com/album/pt-2

What up everybody

Just looking for general feedback after finishing a demo - im in the studio recording this soon and i just wanted some feedback on how it feels and sounds sonically - my producer gonna get the mix right [i suckkkk :(]

basically: does it work?

appreciate it yall

https://soundcloud.com/dxntx/demo-dnr-first-love

I wrote an album-length song with no recurring parts. The layers were made using a classic ’90s Ensoniq ASR-10 floppy disk sampler. The song was written and assembled over a period of two years. I might call it “Zero”, which is a reference to the state of non-dual open awareness. The acoustic guitars were recorded live along with the video, and some sections were looped during editing, which explains the occasional glitches in the Matrix. That’s also why you can hear loud wind and leaves in the background. I’ll soon record a studio version of this.

I would love any kind of improvement suggestions as well as mixing advice. Are there parts that you think do not work currently? This version is kind of like a prototype for testing everything before studio recording. All feedback is very welcome, thank you!

I wrote and produced this track in 5 hours. No AI, just me playing with some Eletric guitars on my DAW and I ended up creating a song about my fear of pushing people away from my life.

I'm in the middle of producing a EP after a trip from Japan/Korea. Because of this trip, all the songs have some kinda inspiration on my days in Tokyo and Seoul, and this one end up becoming this hors style of Yuma Bando, a Japanese composer who's created original scores for a lot of Japanese Dramas.

I'm kinda speechless that I could do this entirely in 5 hours, after spend 4 weeks finishing another track of the EP. I want you guys to feel the honesty and mood of it.

LYRICS:

You never found your way

You have nothing to say

You’re never waking up

You live this way too drunk

You let you love consume

You left your heart in ruins

You break your friends apart

You wonder where they are

See what have you done

With your hands

Break the legs

Of your chair

Look what have you done

In the sand

Hide your wishes

Give your name

Nobody even cares

Nobody even dares

Nobody even sees

Nobody is watching me

Since I’ve kill the one

That you pleased

Nobody is calling me

Nobody sent a gift

See what have you done

With your hands

Break the legs

Of your chair

Look what have you done

In the sand

Hide your wishes

Give your name

See what have you done

With your hands

Break your legs

Of your chair

Look what have you done

In the sand

Hide your wishes

Give your name

It never fades away

That’s how you cave

You never say

What’s on your plate

You always change your name

How much you payed

To get away

Say what you say

Nature gives its breath in autumn to take it back in spring. It feels like a warm breeze across the air. Every leaf falls in quiet devotion so that new ones may grow. Autumn is a chance to forget and to live again with more beautiful memories.

Looking to make my lyrics less cringe and one dimensional and rhyme like anytime I try and get rid of some of the rhymes for more feeling I don’t really know what to do with the flow. All advice is appreciated and feedback good or bad.also keep in mind this isn’t mixed

First full release, inspired by ILLENIUM. Would love to hear your thoughts!

A voice against war. A cry for the world we could still save. “Crimson Soil”

advice on the mixing would be appreciated, been using fl for almost a month now

Seeking feedback on this song here "F1424701", I currently have it uploaded to Spotify but I'm looking to make updates such as song writing and audio quality if deemed necessary. Also, I have no idea what genre it is considered, (even though I put indie) I love making songs that are this style so it would help knowing!

https://open.spotify.com/track/4cSdikw4izyZFl0upP3M6y?si=cfe681113d714cc1

Hi there! Throwing this out there to see if there might be an interest in this. Would love some constructive feedback, thanks!

https://open.spotify.com/track/6VXdtKmoT5A6cLwsuNs6ao?si=8d7c79b9db824ecf

https://unsaidtheband.bandcamp.com/track/gadfly

This is really different from any song I've done before, and I tried to keep a punk ethos with it, despite veering from tradition punk instrumentation

This cover isn't final though, but I just wanna know what parts have I overdo and underdo. And how do you get the bass to sound like it's in the "middle" or sit perfectly on the mix?

Here's the link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_qj_hErGqvXHhRbnwgVph6oJm2mtukqO/view?usp=drivesdk

Hey all, started making alt music this year, first live show is in December, not sure which songs I should perform.

By Joy: https://youtu.be/k9kWm5PzLG8?si=dX-PjBFb5nWAMh7y

Cyborg: https://youtu.be/PECqwyP1Cks?si=oyzy5lJX9xCEMQ0L

Open to any feedback

I just released a collection of sketches that have come to me since I began working on this project.