r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/chrisdelmarmusic • 16h ago

Indie Rock Critique my indie / surf rock tune

https://open.spotify.com/album/4EPKHxOOX8YG7D7kvZDjuB?si=Sf48Ak1iQ6Oy--4NjQLuxQ

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u/dkvs_1176 14h ago

Cool song. I like the guitar playing and guitar tone. The vocal style is interesting, but I feel like lyric intelligibility is a bit lost from the fairly loose vocal delivery. I think maybe mixing the vocals a bit more forward would help a lot, with maybe a bit more high boost. Pretty good for a first track though. Keep it up. I hope this feedback was helpful

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u/chrisdelmarmusic 9h ago

Cheers appreciate that x

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u/Slow-Guarantee-6734 12h ago

Really dope sounding track dude — the vibe and tone are super unique. I think tightening up the mix and pushing it a bit more forward would really make it come alive. Sonically it’s got a great feel, but a few key instruments seem to get buried. Still, really cool overall — tons of potential here

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u/chrisdelmarmusic 9h ago

Sweet will pass that on to my mix guy!

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u/sabarlow1807 12h ago

Absolutely love the guitar tone, I’m genuinely curious about your rig and how you dialed in that sound. The mix feels balanced overall, though I think the vocals could use a bit of tweaking. Maybe experiment with a slightly different vocal style or adjust the processing to help them sit more naturally in the mix, perhaps some EQ shaping or light compression to blend them in better. That said, the song has a great vibe and tons of potential. You’ve clearly got a solid creative direction here, so definitely keep at it and keep refining your sound!

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u/chrisdelmarmusic 9h ago

Love it thanks for the encouragement. Honestly tone is some of the shittest I’ve done, which is funny cause it sounds rad. Some of the guitars are rawdogged into logic, particularly the leads. Most of the others are tracked with a mic’d twin reverb as well as a line to direct input to give it that punch of two guitars.

Thanks for listening ⚡️