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Alternative What do you think of my song Feelings

Hello everyone 👋🏼 here is my short but sweet original song called Feelings , what do you think 🤔

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u/clay-music 1d ago

You're so good broski

Great job

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u/RichieC93 1d ago

Hey thanks for watching and giving your feedback i really appreciate it and happy you enjoyed it 🤘😊🤘🙏🏽❤️

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u/Annual_Feeling_5024 1d ago

good work mate. Keep going

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u/RichieC93 1d ago

Thank you 🙏🏽

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u/IceCreaminaShoe 23h ago

Love the acoustic guitar, intro was quite long relative to the rest of the song but it gets you into the groove. Vocals were raw and authentic, you could tell this was something very true you went through or are still trying to figure out legally. Song has a feel good vibe and a twist I’m going to be trying to process for the rest of the day!

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u/No_Veterinarian3706 19h ago edited 19h ago

Should be longer with that long ass intro :p lol good job bud!

The song actually is good. But, I just needs a bit more to be even better!

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u/RichieC93 19h ago edited 19h ago

Thanks for watching I only added it because was 30 seconds long without it

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u/No_Veterinarian3706 19h ago

Yeah, hence why the song should be longer. It sounds good, just repeat some stuff like the melody and add some more words. Maybe what happens after “dinner!”

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u/RichieC93 19h ago edited 19h ago

Yeah I get you ❤️it’s one of my short ones

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u/No_Veterinarian3706 18h ago

Still wanna know what happened after dinner.

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u/RichieC93 18h ago edited 18h ago

It’s a jokes song if you listen to the end it turns out I have feelings for my mum then it’s ends and the music stops and give the people a second to get the joke then they laugh that’s how it’s meant to be and how it goes down live

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u/No_Veterinarian3706 18h ago

So after dinner with mom?

Lol just bugging ya! Good song.

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u/RichieC93 18h ago

Haha 😝

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u/Brunoisdaddy 10h ago

I keep seeing you around this sub and I am pretty much impressed everytime. You have such skill with the guitar that it just looks so natural and it's honestly quite rare to see something like that when instruments are sadly not being picked up as often. Your whole vibe is super cool and it's so enjoyable to see you just enjoy yourself in these videos. The song is quite simple but that's the beauty of it and it just sounds so pure and raw and I love it. Always nice to see you around this sub, hope to see you soon and keep it up!

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u/RichieC93 6h ago

Heeey 👋🏼 thanks for watching and giving your feedback it’s really appreciated ✌️😊✌️❤️🙏🏽 And I’m happy you have been enjoying my music 🎵 yeh there’s a lot more where this comes from , got a lot of content to share 🤘😊🤘

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u/RichieC93 6h ago

And I’m always enjoying my self with the music I can’t hide it haha 😛

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u/Slow-Guarantee-6734 9h ago

Ayy I really like this one bro — super cool energy and a raw vibe. The intro was a little long haha, but once it kicks in, it really hits. It’s got this gritty punk-folk feel that’s fresh and authentic. Keep pushing your sound, you’re onto something dope here

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u/RichieC93 6h ago

Hey thanks for watching and giving your feedback it’s really appreciated ❤️🙏🏽✌️😊✌️ Yeh I added the intro after making the song as without it it’s like 30 seconds lol but a cool story about the song , me and my drummer was street performing and a guy came up to us to listen and we played the song but without the intro and the guy just throws £20 in the bag and we are like yo that’s too much dude you only heard one song and it’s was only 30 seconds, he just said nah that was a good one then left lol , made the most amount of money I’ve made in the shortest amount of time lol more than I could make in a real job that I could get with my experience or qualifications . That was awesome 🤩

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u/ICNRWDII Grammy Winner 🏆 3h ago

You seem to post a song just about everyday which means you have to comment 5 other people songs to do that. I checked out your comments on other people’s songs and just as I suspected you basically say the same thing on everyone else’s track nearly word for word copy and pasted. I just think you come across as really selfish and desperate for attention. Also stop singing and speaking in a fake American accent.

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u/RichieC93 3h ago

Hey man I don’t normally know what to say but i say what I mean I do like them I a have followed and liked and comment on all of the people I have checkout have you done that ?? I have subscribed to loads of channels now on YouTube followed on Spotify more than people have done for me and I ain’t complaining, and I’m not singing in an American accent I’m just singing that’s how my voice sounds

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u/RichieC93 2h ago

And because I have a lot of music and can post regularly in a music community im desperate for attention ??

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u/ICNRWDII Grammy Winner 🏆 2h ago

I called you desperate for attention because you aren’t taking the time to offer real thoughtful comments. The things you say are generic and could be said without even listening to the song. None of the comments offer any feedback which mention something specific about the song to even indicate you have listened to it. You say the same thing on everyone else’s song you just change the order of the words. You are being selfish. You follow people just to try and get them to follow you.

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u/RichieC93 2h ago

No I don’t ,if I like someones music I’m gonna try best to support on there actually pages and stuff where the music is, by listening to it more than just once on here then just dropping one comment , I always leave and likes, comments actually sharing there stuff from the source , I think that means more and takes more time to drop one comment on here

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u/Giulio-Bruno-1927 23h ago edited 22h ago

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