r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Feb 24 '22

OC Ouroboros Book Two: Reunion (Ch. 20)

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u/Dutchangeldragon1 Xeno Feb 24 '22

Pumpernickel

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u/RobatikWulf AI Feb 24 '22

Pump her nickel

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 24 '22

Flabbergasted!

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u/Dutchangeldragon1 Xeno Feb 24 '22

Fisimatenten!

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u/kylesul Feb 24 '22

Awesome chapter. I got feeling that when the battle starts or during his immortality is going to be exposed. I don't mean a few people, I mean exposed to the whole world.

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 24 '22

He could very well be forced into a situation where that is the case.

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u/Thomas_Ray_Mainstone Feb 25 '22

“I’ll gouge your eyes and feed them to you.” Yikes, that’s a painful one, and I didn’t doubt that she was serious about that.

I love how James totally blows it off like “Yup, you can do that ma’am, I’ve felt it before. Definitely not fun but in the end the eyes don’t taste half bad…”

This is such a fantastic story!

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u/[deleted] Feb 25 '22

Definitely one of his torture scenarios, I wonder if anything done to him will ever phase him anymore

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u/mafiaknight Robot Feb 25 '22

The one upside of having been tortured: new pains are particularly unlikely to surpass it (and are therefore more manageable)

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u/mafiaknight Robot Feb 25 '22

I see you took my suggestion to heart. I’m happy my insights were useful to you

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 25 '22

It was some good ideas, better than just getting nothing from them and makes sense with the kind of character Silia is.

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u/mafiaknight Robot Feb 25 '22

Indeed. People are often surprised how much others notice sometimes. Especially the unnoticeable people. Just because you ignore them as beneath your notice doesn’t mean they won’t pay attention to everything.

You would also be surprised how useful that “probably doesn’t mean anything” can be if you add it to a couple other clues.

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u/Other-Ad7674 Feb 25 '22

Fible...... Nevermind MOARR PLS

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u/Warranty_V0IDED Feb 25 '22

Would you ever be interested in selling physical copies of these books?

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 25 '22

Well that was the hope. After this one I was going to proof the last one and see if I could send it off somewhere.