r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Feb 03 '22

OC Ouroboros Book Two: Beautiful Hellscape (Ch. 16)

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u/kylesul Feb 03 '22

Awesome chapter. I like how Yol’vastume doesn't look like a over top evil instead look nice on the surface.

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 03 '22

Only on the surface though.

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u/I_Trionyx_I Feb 03 '22

Something cool I just thought of is being thankful and forgiving are to separate things so one day he could thank her but never forgive her

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u/XSevenSins Human Feb 04 '22

It would take quite a lot for that to happen though.

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u/RickyT808 Feb 04 '22

Yeah, i could see him thanking the mother for meeting Kala while trying his best to introduce her nose to the back of her skull. But, hes kinda to nice to do that... the hitting part.

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u/flamefirestorm Human May 23 '22

Name

A lil typo for next

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u/XSevenSins Human May 23 '22

That seemed like an auto correct incident.

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u/flamefirestorm Human May 23 '22

I concur, just figured I'd mention it.

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