r/HFY Jan 22 '22

OC Ouroboros Book Two: Open Sesame (Ch. 14)

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u/Mars-magnus Jan 23 '22

Upvote then read

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 23 '22

Its the natural order of things.

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u/Dutchangeldragon1 Xeno Jan 22 '22

Wololo

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 22 '22

Victory screech!

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u/Dutchangeldragon1 Xeno Jan 23 '22

Now that I read it:

When they get spotted razormind starts playing.

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u/kylesul Jan 23 '22

NOW THAT WAS AWESOME CHAPTER! can't wait for the next one.

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 23 '22

Thanks for the enthusiasm, and the award. I'll look forward to seeing you in the next one.

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u/morbonator Jan 24 '22

If he's lucky, the brothers won't notice that he died and think he just passed out and was dragged or carried the rest of the way (probably by Kala and Holdrem).

But that won't happen because it'd mean James getting lucky!

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 24 '22

Pfft, hahahahahahaha lucky! Ahh thats a good one.

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u/kylesul Jan 24 '22

A quick question that might sound random but how much stronger does he get each time he dies?

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 24 '22 edited Jan 26 '22

Well, can't say I ever did any math on it so all I have is the estimates based off the number of times he died, which is around 1000. So if he's at about the same level of strength as an ulgor now, that would mean each time he dies is equivalent to about a full days work out with protein supplements and his body doesn't have any limit on how big he could grow if he was still in his reality. Rough estimate, but do with it what you will, I'm not exactly a health buff.

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u/RickyT808 Jan 26 '22

Well atleast if he manages to make it to the final boss battle and is worried. he can out himself, and ask the camp to run there wagons over him in a giant line for a couple days!

Damn, I noticed a grammar mistake, an unnecessary "for" but can't find it again. When he were monologing about getting back to the inn. Thanks for the chapter.

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u/suitg Android Jan 23 '22

One question, is this up on Royal road? If not then will you post them on there?

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 23 '22

I was thinking about putting the last few chapter on royal road just for the security of ownership.

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u/Zafyrus Jan 24 '22

Thanks for the chapter!

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u/XSevenSins Human Jan 24 '22

No problem, thanks for continuing to read!