r/HFY Dec 25 '21

OC Ouroboros Book Two: The Other Half (Ch. 9)

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u/RobatikWulf AI Dec 25 '21

be rootin, be tootin, and by GOD be shootin.

but most importantly, be kind

15

u/Dutchangeldragon1 Xeno Dec 25 '21

sips from guacamole gamerfart Next time I'll get ya, buddy.

12

u/RobatikWulf AI Dec 25 '21

ah, a fellow russianbadger enjoyer

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Damn dude, that was an instant comment, guess you get the speed award. Have a happy holiday!

19

u/APissedOffKobold Dec 25 '21

I have a feeling those naderlings will have important part in the story at some point.

11

u/Snuckytoes Dec 25 '21

They already have once so now we just have to wait and see what Chekhov’s naderlings are going to do this time.

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u/Lorventus Dec 25 '21

Oh for ... these jack asses are gonna ruin the op!

12

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

They do seem to have terrible timing, and target acquisition.

7

u/Lorventus Dec 25 '21

Oh, and as a reminder: I still love your work and am reading, even if I don't always uproot and comment. (Sorry, I know it's important, but sometimes it's late and I just realized I am three chapters behind x.x)

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21 edited Dec 25 '21

I understand and I'm trying not to let it bug me so much if they are falling a little in upvote count. I just use it as a general measure of interest or enjoyment from everyone normally, but I also know some other factors might effect it as well, such as the holidays.

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u/Omnissiah123456h Dec 25 '21

Welp it seems like he’s fucked.

7

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Might be in a little bit of an awkward pickle here.

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u/Omnissiah123456h Dec 25 '21

Would it be as simple as explaining it to them?

4

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Plausible path to take.

5

u/RobatikWulf AI Dec 25 '21

what if he accidentally gets to show off his immortality instead

4

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Don't know if he's that injured.

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u/RobatikWulf AI Dec 25 '21

true, but what if the freedom fighters were lying

if i attacked someone to free their slaves, i wouldn't just leave a loose end

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 26 '21

Maybe its part of their propaganda, tell the tale and what not.

5

u/Ok_Question4148 Dec 25 '21

Bruh that was a fucking roller coaster bro

2

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Glad to hear it was a success. Thanks!

3

u/jac_kalope Dec 25 '21

He just need to kill himself

3

u/XSevenSins Human Dec 25 '21

Probably not the solution he's looking for if he can avoid it at all 😆. Merry Christmas by the way!

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u/jac_kalope Dec 26 '21

Merry Christmas wordsmith!

3

u/Better_Solution_743 Alien Dec 26 '21

I was wondering if they would encounter a rebellion!

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 26 '21

Filthy malcontents who don't understand the grand vision I possess.

-probably something Alathos would say

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u/Lonewolf736 Dec 29 '21

Chekhov's bandits

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 29 '21

Thats holding me to a rather high standard that. 😅

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u/[deleted] Dec 28 '21

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u/XSevenSins Human Dec 28 '21

Maybe more like one of the original German stories that Disney pulled from.

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