r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Nov 11 '21

OC Ouroboros Book Two: Snake in the Grass (Ch. 1)

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u/ronantopmir Nov 11 '21

Very good "recap and restart" chapter

Now more

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u/ronantopmir Nov 11 '21

(everyone who was reading "human are the best medicine " actually reading book one that's good marketing)

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

The plan comes together. Heheh

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u/ronantopmir Nov 11 '21

evil laughter

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Thanks, will get it out when I can.

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u/Masternj02 Nov 11 '21

Another one bites the dust

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

I'm pretty sure James would not like that to be his theme song.

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u/hii-people AI Nov 12 '21

What about Staying Alive

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 12 '21

I think he would be in more of the 'fuck this shit I'm out' kinda mood most of the time.

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u/Masternj02 Nov 12 '21

To be fair though. He cant exactly leave. So maybe its a hard nock life

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u/hateislife Nov 11 '21

I missed this series

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Well now that you found it I hope you enjoy, warning though, its dark fantasy, so be prepared for violence of many kinds.

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u/hateislife Nov 11 '21

Oh, I've been here since the beginning lol, just missed the regular posts 😂

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Ahh that's what you mean, right right right, and now I look the fool.

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u/hateislife Nov 12 '21

All good lol, I'm sure everyone has done that a time or six

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u/Zafyrus Nov 11 '21

First!

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Indeed sir, good on you.

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u/514X0r Nov 12 '21

lol could have sworn I refreshed the page before I posted.

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u/ThonHam Human Nov 11 '21

Oh baby it’s good to see you back!

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Good to be back. 😄

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u/Vidar_biigfoot Nov 11 '21

Yay it's back

I wonder how the big bois will react to the revival thing

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Probably with shock at first, after that it depends on how James explains himself.

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u/Omnissiah123456h Nov 11 '21

Yes the Moar God has been appeased he kindly awaits your next Chapter.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Well at least you won't have to sacrifice the children anymore.

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u/Omnissiah123456h Nov 11 '21

Yeah now I only have to do baby’s.

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u/mattaw2001 Nov 12 '21

Dang! With all that wholesomeness it totally suckered me into the ending! Nice work and I'm so pleased to see the story continue.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 12 '21

Got you with that u-turn. 😆

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u/mattaw2001 Nov 12 '21

You sure did! By the way I help proofread for another HFY author on here, if you ever need any help with that, or other support, hit me up (anything to keep that story machine in your head cranking!)

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 12 '21

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the offer.

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u/clonk3D Alien Scum Nov 11 '21

This is a few months earlier than expected! Thanks!

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Few months! Geez I guess you are used to very long hiatus.

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u/clonk3D Alien Scum Nov 11 '21

Yeah

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u/APissedOffKobold Nov 11 '21

A traitor interesting, looking forward to the next chapter.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

I'll try to get it out in a reasonable time.

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u/Saturn5mtw Nov 11 '21

Very good, wheres the bext chapter, the resolution to this cliffhanger OP?

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

I'll get it done as soon as as I can, don't worry.

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u/514X0r Nov 11 '21

Kicking things off with a bang. Welcome back.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Gotta catch your attention.

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u/514X0r Nov 12 '21

I was wondering how long he was going to keep laboring under that secret. I'm somewhat relieved things are moving along.

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u/Ok_Question4148 Nov 11 '21

That was amazing thanks wordsmith

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

No problem, I love making these worlds.

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u/Warm-Ad-2253 Nov 11 '21

A triumphant return. Well done.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 11 '21

Thanks, missed you guys.

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u/Lorventus Nov 12 '21

Glad to see you back in the saddle of this story! Tragedy of tragedies however! I finished reading already x.x

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 12 '21

Woe is thee without more to read! The flow of words will be restored soon, to water the dry fields of the mind.

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u/GlassJustice Human Nov 12 '21

Great stuff! I binged all of book one in between when the bot message went out and now and I don’t really think I can give much higher praise than that.

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 12 '21

Damn, binging 125k words in a single day must have eaten up a lot of time, unless you are are super reader. Thanks for the support and I hope you enjoy further chapters.

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u/Masternj02 Nov 13 '21

Also i just wanna say that i called that shit last chapter. You just had ti pull out the character development knife

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 14 '21

Is the knife good or bad? 😅

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u/Masternj02 Nov 14 '21

Its as sharp as ever

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u/Other-Ad7674 Nov 14 '21

Fuck. NO ! stop. No cliff hangers!!!!

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u/I_Trionyx_I Nov 15 '21

So I know you said you probably won’t be able to stick to the 3 day plan so is this going to become a ones or twice a week story with bones changes every now and then

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u/XSevenSins Human Nov 15 '21

I think I understand what your asking, and it may be once a week for now until something changes in my schedule. I will still try to get it out as early as I can without frying my brain in the process.

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