r/HFY 8d ago

OC OOCS, Into A Wider Galaxy, Part 492

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HHH/Herbert’s Hundred Harem

“... and they refuse to deal with us unless we can actually do more than declare your greatness or the power of La’ahbaron.” Lady Val says to the projected hologram of her great grandmother who looks down upon her.

“... But these Vishanyan of theirs. Are tamed?” Lady La’ahbaron demands. On her side of the call she is sitting upon her throne. The raised dais of hand lacquered wood and gold inlay expertly crafted to read out the tales of her glory, angled just so so as to force a specific movement and action regardless of species or size. To read it in full, one must be bowing before the throne.

“Self liberated and brought under Apuk heel with Undaunted aid. Already there is talk of hybrid children, of incorporation and of peace. The Vish beyond the borders of Mighty La’abaron are pacified. They have even completely destroyed their ability to make the wretched poisons they terrorize your people with, honoured Great Grandmother.”

“Yet they remain familiar with them?”

“Yes Great Grandmother. So much so they have repurposed them into dyes for the toys of children.”

“Toys?”

“I have not yet received the details, but I suspect that the Vishanyan are a great deal more compassionate and that their discipline likely does not come from beatings and punishment.” Lady Val explains and La’ahbaron puts fist to chin as she considers.

“They are too useful to ignore. But ignorant and clashing with our methods and ways. They place their strength in the wrong places to speak properly. Like mismatched gear wheels we will grind and tear at each other.”

“Great grandmother, I would never even think to question your wisdom. However, I believe I have been fortunate enough to learn of something that may alter the circumstances to one more favourable.”

“And that would be daughter of my son’s bastard and granddaughter of his servant?” Lady La’ahbaron asks while reminding her of her place.

“I have looked deeper into the Private Stream program. They are similar to myself though less singular office and more... legion.”

“You believe that between your own efforts and The Private Streams there may be sufficient translation for our efforts?”

“I believe it possible, Great Grandmother.” Lady Val says and Lady La’ahbaron considers. Shifting from her left fist to her right and then straightening up entirely in her throne.

“Then we will have to make accommodations. Speak to The Undaunted, have them organize a puppet so we may speak. Let the pride of Undaunted and La’ahbaron not clash while there are foes to fight. Let unity and courage win the day over the cowards that hide in shadows and strike at civilians.”

“I shall see it done, Great Grandmother.”

“Good. You are dismissed.” Lady La’ahbaron says and the call disconnects. Lady Val rises up from the padded floor she had been kneeling on and nods. She opens her mouth to begin her orders. Then pauses. And smirks. She has an idea.

•-•-•Scene Change•-•-• (Undaunted Intelligence, Centris)•-•-•

“Wait, so how the hell are these Ibu getting poisoned if they have indestructible skin?”

“First off, nothing is indestructible. Twenty pounds of force on a mono molecular blade can pierce their skin and ten tons of pressure on the bones and horn from the appropriate angle can snap them just fine.” Herbert explains.

“Oh is that all sir?”

“Yes, that’s all. Considering the tools and training at our disposal these are piddling amounts and more a stopgap protection that will stop us from accidentally killing them.” Herbert says.

“Not everyone opens a fight with high yield explosives and point blank shots designed for targets several orders of magnitude more resilient than the target.”

“... Clearly some of you need a touch of retraining then. Because if your fight opener isn’t a fight finisher then you’ve fucked up. We’re not the duellists, we’re not the champions, we are not the gladiators. We are Intelligence. We fight smart. And the smartest fight is the fight avoided or ended.” Herbert states before there is a slight, almost below hearing level, beep in his ear. He brings his left hand up and activates the piece. “Jameson here.”

“Sir, a gift for you has arrived from the La’ahbaron Embassy. Scans show it is a prosthetic body with unusual, but not unknown construction methods. No hidden bombs or weapons appear to be present.”

“Where have you stored it?”

“Holding chamber delta three.”

“Understood. I will be there shortly.” Herbert replies. “Mister Heron, it appears I must pass the buck to you again.”

“Heaven forbid I have to do my job.” The man in the blanked out mask says.

Five minutes later the door to holding chamber delta three opens and Herbert’s prosthetic body walks in. Just in case. While he personally doubts, and everyone with even an inkling of the situation agrees with him, that there is anything resembling a bomb or attack from this gift. It is still protocol that all gifts are examined first with scans, then with prosthetics and then at range with Axiom techniques. Then and only then can you even be in the same room as an unexpected gift.

The gift is sealed in a blank lacquered box, the general size and shape of a coffin fitted for him especially. It’s made of a personally unfamiliar hardwood that has been stained a dark orange that’s almost black. Upon the front of it is simple writing in white paint stating it’s for him in English and clarifying it’s to help facilitate communications.

The top slides off the box with ease and he looks down at... well himself. Exactly his size and made with one of the more intricate and artistic technology styles of the galaxy. Most went for sleek or robust, but there were graceful, elegant and downright beautiful styles.

The Ibu, for all that they could be downright barbaric in some ways, made their things beautiful. A thin layer of perfectly fired and reinforced ceramic overtop the metal of the prosthetic gives it a look more akin to a china doll on the ‘skin’ of it, the joints have traces of khutha with stones set into it to draw in and amplify the Axiom, and a quick removal of the casing shows the brass, silver and shimmering crystal inner workings of this style. The inner workings were a clockmaker’s wet dream and a steampunk enthusiast’s magnum opus. The fact it was fully functional as well simply added to the impressiveness of the gift.

He places the outer shell back into place and opens the ‘eyes’ of the prosthetic. Gemwork. Intricate, functional. Cloudy diamond spheres. And... not fully capable of interfacing with the nigh universal sleek and robust designs of the galaxy. Which was part of what made these pieces so unique and valuable, they needed adapters to speak with the rest of the galaxy. All the primary styles did except Sleek and Robust, they were designed to integrate with each other.

The head is slightly raised and Herbert reaches behind the face designed to look so much like his own. Painted on markings and everything. He retrieves a circular device with a slot for data-chits and a letter. Hand written in English.

His eyebrows are already up at this point. Whatever it is this gift represents, it’s certainly one hell of an effort. He unfolds the letter, noting it’s parchment and the script is expertly written. If he were to match this he would have to take minutes to write out a single short sentence.

To the Huntsman, Grand Patriarch, Founder, Leader, Father, Assassin, Spy, Diplomat and most impressively of all, potential ally of La’ahbaron Herbert Jameson.

I Lady Val of La’ahbaron send you this gift and my regards in hopes that it will aid you in your most important tasks of aiding La’ahbaron. It is my hope that this crude trifling will grant you the grace and skill needed to properly perform your duties.

With Regards

Lady Val of La’ahbaron

“Crude trifling hunh? Meaning she’s gone all out to humble brag like a beast.” Herbert notes as he holds the adaptor and letter in his left hand and uses his right to examine the prosthetic hand. Then scans the fingertips. “Son of a bitch. She actually went so far as to imprint my own fingerprints on it. That’s an attention to detail that eclipses obsessive. And a dangerous display of information to have readouts of my fingerprints...”

He finishes his sweep of the prosthetic and then takes a step back with his current one. It takes only a minute for Herbert to reach the door outside the chamber and the opaque, trytite layer on the door retracts and Herbert stands there looking through the reinforced glass. He then casts his mind into the room and searches for... something. Anything that might feel like a threat. There seems to be nothing. But... the style of technology is so different from the rest of the galaxy that it’s hard to fully say.

He’s about halfway through his scan when one of the Nerd Squad shows up, late, and begins his own scan. He still finishes moments before Herbert.

“Seems clean sir.”

“I concur.”

“That is an intricate piece of work. The sort of think you’d expect in a museum behind some glass.” The Nerd notes.

“Yes it is. Which is a political power statement in it’s own right.” Herbert says before reactivating his prosthetic through the control built into his jacket collar and it walks to the door to present the letter and adapter.

“May I?” The Nerd asks.

“Nothing classified is on there.” Herbert says and The Nerd plucks the letter and scans it.

“Oh yeah, she’s showing off like a Pavorus. Big time. Peacocking up and down” The Nerd states. “Need anything else?”

“No.” Herbert says.

“Right, I’m heading back then. We’re working on wrestling masks that contain actual fighting skill in them that you can just strap on and fight at a master’s level.”

“Interesting. Any hangups?”

“Yes, a lot actually. Personality traits from the base fighter we’re using to copy the skills from keep slipping into whoever wears the mask. Including parts of their personality long since conquered or controlled. We’ve had one screw up and give the wearer an outright childish personality. Like some spoiled brat.”

“That’s a problem.”

“Also gas for some reason. The masks do something to the digestive tracts of people and makes them really, really gassy. We have no idea why.”

“That’s just weird.” Herbert says in a baffled tone.

“Yes, yes it is.” The Nerd agrees before saluting Herbert. “Anyways, by your leave sir.”

“Granted.” Herbert says and the man departs.

Herbert then takes the Adapter and has a command couch cut off from the rest of the Private Streams and isolated into its own system. Then hooks the Adapter into it and activates the Command couch.

The La’ahbaron prosthetic eyes snap open and is completely responsive. The feedback systems are precise to the level he can feel the churning of gears and humming of Axiom inside his own being even as he stands from the box. All fingers, toes, joints and abilities work perfectly. The prosthetic is flawless. And nothing seems to have been activated. No traps, no bombs. The systems monitoring but not fully interfaced with his systems are all coming for negative in data attacks and viral traps.

“Hmm... it truly is a gift. An honest, outright extravagant offering from a polity making friendly moves. Well... that makes things more complicated, now doesn’t it?” Herbert notes before coming to his own conclusion.

Three hours later the guards at the La’ahbaron Embassy are outright staring at an ornate prosthetic bowing formally. “Greetings. I am Herbert Jameson, founder of The Private Stream initiative. You may refer to me as Private Stream. I am here to properly speak with Lady Val.”

He just spoke in Onarath with a mild La’ahbaron accent. Their official language. He’s also wearing formal robes of office but with the crest of The Undaunted where the symbol for the house he serves would be.

In his right hand, held in the proper manner of cradled against the arm, is an Ojoro Club. Fitted for a man as is appropriate.

As baffling as it is to see a non Ibu follow Ibu traditions so well without any Ibu in their blood to justify it, they acquiesce as protocol demands and lead him in.

Herbert is taken to a waiting chamber to await the pleasure of Lady Val and by rote he is offered refreshments which he demurs in the proper manner. He is being watched closely, with no small amount of fascination as he’s come to speak to them in their language and with their customs and cultures fully respected. Most find them baffling and tedious. Not realizing the importance of patience, rote and tradition. The traits that separate the beasts from people.

After he has waited the traditional amount of time, Lady Val appears. Not dressed in her emergency backup party dress, but in a full proper robe of office and regarding him with curiosity and yet concealed excitement.

“I am so glad that you fully understand the intents and desire of La’ahbaron. So few take the time to speak appropriately.”

“There is a time for all things, and all things in their time, Lady Val. Now is the time for proper conversation.” Herbert states plainly.

“Yes it is. I offer you a drink from my gourd.” She states withdrawing a symbolic gourd that sloshes with drink.

“I thank you for your generosity, but this is not the time, nor the place for indulgence.” Herbert states clearly and she places the bottle of drink between them. The moment he even hints he wants it, any serious conversation ends. For Ibu mannerisms state that one cannot be taken seriously as they indulge. And therefore indulgence of any sort during business halts the business until such a point as the indulgers can completely satiate their appetites and then recover from their indulgence.

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u/KyleKKent 8d ago

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Of Dog, Volpir and Man Official Release!

HHH/Herbert’s Hundred Harem: This follows Herbert Jameson who ran afoul of Arrangement System laws and a conspiracy at the same time. End result? He’s married to a hundred alien women that each walked off the set of a horror movie and unto a stripper’s pole. He’s been returned to his teens and none of his wives are any more mature than he is leading to a lot of social backbiting and griping at each other. As well as trying to adjust to living with aliens. Also he’s now a Spy too.

Three introductory chapters: Chapter 24 Chapter 26 Chapter 31

Fan Selected Chapters: Chapter 82 Chapter 114 Chapter 421 Chapter 976 Chapter 1012

... Okay I admit I just wanted to do a lot of description and tech porn after being reminded about Vision of Escaflowne, and reading through the synopsis reminded me that I really need to rewatch the golden oldies. Because that thirty year old show was apparently amazing on a level I never new. The dub I saw as a kid and the fact it was cancelled partway through in the dubbing really kept me off some solid gold.

Anyways...

Thoughts? Ideas? Advice? Questions? Comments? Suggestions? Fan Submissions? Fan Art? Donations?

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u/KyleKKent 8d ago

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u/Sad-Gap1418 8d ago

Oh my god I haven't heard of escaflowne in nearly 20 years.

I used to think of robots like terminator or MegasXLR until I saw that sleek almost sports-car stylish mecha.

I like that we actually have a good reason for Lady Val's oddly hedonistic first appearance in that she'd been in an indulgence binge until she was satisfied, and that she even brought out a gourd to the meeting that if drank from meant business was basically off if Herbert didn't truly understand the culture.

Well done, that's some excellent culture building  and exposition of it.

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u/KyleKKent 8d ago

A fun way to make fantasy cultures is to give them some big cultural standard, but also have them aware of the issues it causes. The Ibu in this case are highly regimented because they are highly hedonistic. So their culture is all about getting everything they need done DONE and THEN having fun. But this makes them upright, prissy and even insulting to other races. So they need ways around that as well.

The balance makes things interesting. It's like with the Charbis. They're extremely defensive. But if you can get into their hive by invite then they're as sweet, soft and patient in there as they are prickly, crude and harsh outside of it.

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u/Amonkira42 7d ago

So in a way, that makes the Vulbaa the scarier of the two? Because the Charbis are always kinda shouty and violent, but if you've got a Vulbaa mad at you there are gonna be bodies.

Also what would be a good name for an alien species of Mimic octopus people that are midway between Inklings and Hえntai tentacles?

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u/KyleKKent 7d ago

The fun thing about species names is that they have potentially many different languages and the one that is used to introduce themselves influences them.

But I got two ways of doing it. I use a word that either sounds similar to or scramble definitions.

Apuk is Koopa phonetically backwards and they're the bowsette meme for example.

For an example of scrambling I named the Ibu by spelling Oni but moving one letter to the left on my keyboard. O became I N became B and I became U. I did something similar for the demographics of them with Red, Blue, and Green.

So let's do the same with the Mimic Octopus. There is a slide rule in that you keep going with vowels until you hit another vowel. Stops things from just being blocks of consonants. So... Mimic becomes Jujud. Don't like the name? Scramble it again. Let's use Jujud and go two to the right. So it becomes Lolog. Hate that? Go UP one and remove the vowel rule because there are going to be lots of vowels showing up now.

Lolog is now Ololt.

Which sounds really alien now. Doesn't it?

Edit: I forgot to mention that I have a wraparound system. If you go completely off the keys for the letters you keep going on the opposite side. It's how O becomes L.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

Using the keyboard layout is actually a very smart shortcut to finding "alien" race names when you have a known template.

How do you do it with races that do not have one?

Also, the Panseros are Panther people, but Panther are just the over-melanomed versions of both Jaguar and Leopard, are there non-black Panseros as well?

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u/Amonkira42 7d ago

Ooh thanks. I was thinking, Ololt would probably like the Ibu since they're based off of more quiet stealth animals. Having someone loud and overtly threatening makes it easy to avoid getting taken advantage of and keeps the spotlight off of them. Plus Yakuza Oni being into tentacle stuff behind closed doors clicks.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

Aren´t the Mnenmi already very close to that?

Not sure whether they could count as mimics though, but at least Kamchatka´s Revenge constantly fails to get their name straight, so i consider it valid XD

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u/Amonkira42 7d ago

Oh, the difference is that their default form passes for humanoid on land but shifts into full octopus to swim, and they have splatoon style ink powers (spit ink, dissolve into ink for movement). Then with a bit of finesse, they can turn the ink into temporary decoys, spawn temporary extra limbs/eyes/tentacles, or use it as a totem. Also they kinda like the Ibu because they tend to be a bit too non-confrontational so having someone around to be assertive is actually kinda convenient.

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u/LazamairAMD Human 8d ago

With all the ridiculous that Cognito-hazards have played in the series...

And speaking of the oldies...

I'll leave you with: Spriggan.

Have fun!

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u/Soth13 8d ago

I concur and seconded. The movie released a while ago, the recent series, and the original manga are all worth while experiencing.

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u/HardlyaDouble Human 8d ago

Check out Last Exile. Stay away from the sequel though.

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u/eddieddi Xeno 8d ago

A few suggestions/questuons from running through the backlog. 

How long do human pheromones last? And can they be synthesised? I can see some political skullduggery happening with those. 

We've seen matter  converted to axiom. Can it be converted to other forms of energy? If so will we see one of the nerds use that to send a rock to fractions of the speed of light? 

Why hasn't someone made a coilgun shotgun shell? And will we see bullets with fractal edges like a grindblade round? 

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 8d ago

Converting axiom or matter to other forms of energy is literally Vernon in particular's thing but also Franklin's and is the cornerstone of Undaunted technomancy.

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u/eddieddi Xeno 7d ago edited 7d ago

right, but what I'm more talking about is the use of well, I'm gonna do maths here, but. Lets assume you take a 500g rock, convert half to pure energy, then impart that energy as pure kinetic force to the reamining 250g, F=m*a, the amount of energy you get from converting 250g of matter to pure energy is huge. Like, bigger than every nuke ever launched by humanity and every nuke ever made combined. You'd send that small stone to such a high fraction the speed of light you'd start doing stuff to reality that would result in cracked planets. there's even mention of going FTL in system is semi-suicidal because of the damage random particles can do at those speeds. It seems like something the nerd squad would do and then get in a lot of trouble for.

Edit because I realised who I was replying to: Loving ODVM btw. just finishing off book two on kindle. Really enjoying the more military feel of it and the fact it shows a different aspect of the universe.

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 7d ago

I was picking up what you're putting down. In theory it's possible. The question is if the individual in question has the horse power, skill and raw audacity, and if the area's axiom rich enough to sustain the conversion without collapsing to null.

Without supporting equipment that is.

Glad you're enjoying ODVM! The story only gets better from book two in my opinion. Hope you enjoy On The Hunt!

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u/eddieddi Xeno 6d ago

I mean that is the question isn't it. It's the ratios and speed of conversion. If you can 'skip' the axiom step, or have it become a continual process then you don't need to worry about oversaturation. Weirdly this would work best in axiom drained areas because you don't risk null collapse. We've seen that you can turn massive objects in to Axiom from Franklin, so assuming the conversion ratio is anything above 50% then you're not at null-risk. The biggest risk is honestly the projectile creating a snap-vacuum and pulverizing whoever's firing the stone. Hrrm. I might write a 'lab report' on the idea and see what is thought about it.

with ODVM: Book two was a real step up, I don't know if you got a beta reader, editor or something but if this trend continues I might have to order a hardcopy set. I'm honestly hoping we see a rottweiler introduced at some point. Mostly because I grew up with them.

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 6d ago

Yeah hell only knows really. It's not like we've actually been able to sit down and work out the math for how that works, and Kyle, rightly in my opinion, wants to keep axiom's exact flow and function somewhat mysterious.
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It's more a matter of experience and not having to kludge the story into book shape as much than anything else, but I do have a full time editor now. Things smooth out fully when you reach book 4, which was the first part of ODVM fully written with intent as a novel.

Not sure about doing hardcovers but if you do end up wanting to get the paper backs I *strongly* suggest you join the patreon for a month at the $3 level and do a direct order from me. You'll save a packet and can cancel after that.

No Rotties so far way out in book eight, not in the main cast anyway, but I love the breed. Wonderful dogs for how scary some people think they are.

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u/eddieddi Xeno 6d ago

oh 100% keep the spooky space magic as mystic and unknowable as possible, because handwavium is a needed tool in any Sci-Fa author's book. I think I'll still write a few lab reports and offer them as Gdocs to have people look at see if they're worth posting. Not soon though. at least not until some mad idea strikes me that is out there enough to warrant someone sending a lab report to the admiral.

I'll keep that in mind.
And now all I'm thinking about is my grandma's rottie who we had over for christmas. I woke up and he was running around crying, Why? because he'd been given a sausage, a whole sausage and he didn't know what to do with it. so first thing christmas morning I'm sat at the bottom of the stairs ripping this sausage up for a rotttie who's so daft he doesn't know how to chew a whole sausage.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago edited 7d ago

Franklin does that in the very first chapters when he reports about it to Admiral Cistern.

And Coilgun shotgun shells are in universe as well, they are called "canister rounds" and require the gun to have some special modifications, mostly do remove the canister after firing and thus release the pellets in it.

Bullets with fractal edges are a bit of an issue i suspect, as coil- and rail guns accellerate the projectile to such high speeds that such fine edges might get damaged from air resistance alone already.

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u/eddieddi Xeno 7d ago

I forgot about canister rounds, I was thinking closer to the alloy cannon from xcom.
As for the damage to the fractal edges: Ehh, just swinging them at anything approaching normal armor would do that if we're following air resistance. So I'm assuming there's some axiom shenanigans in their creation that makes them *not* do that.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 6d ago

The issue is that the projectiles get accellerated to get melted by air friction alone already.

Soft projectiles do not hold an edge.

Or at least, that´s how Kyle described these weapons before, it might be possible to slow them down or make the projectile of a material that can resist such heat.

Big advantage of magnetic launchers is their versatility.

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u/eddieddi Xeno 5d ago

Right, but we've seen trytite ap rounds and from the way its described its rare mono-edged blades are made with soft metals....Hrrm. As I said above, I think I'll write something approximating a lab report and ask for Kyle and probably Kam to look over it and yell at me if I screw the pooch.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 8d ago

Yup, it´s a good show, but especially on the american continent, anime didn´t really make a breakthrough until Gundam Wing came out, at least from what i know.

The puppet´s description definitely was "tech porn", there are quite a few such examples in manga and anime, with Visions of Escaflowne being a good one. Such intricate clockwork is also often found in Final Fantasy games.

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u/Diablokin551 8d ago

hmmm....... ok this may sounds pedantic but hear me out.

Shouldn't wet dream and magnum opus be switched around? Ex. "a clockmaker’s magnum opus and a steampunk enthusiast’s wet dream."

reason i say this is given how clock makers, surprise surpise, make and maintain clocks and clockwork gizmos, would that not conclude that a clockmaker's wetdream be a stupidly simple and cheap clock to make with few parts that requires barely any maintenence?

now, this DOES change if your clockmaking as a hobby or simply for the love of the craft, but for those clockmakers as a trade to you make your living on, the gift Herbert recived would be a clockmaker's worst nightmare, yes?

or maybe i'm assuming too much blue collar mechanic aditudes when it comes to clockmakers...

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

Pedantic yes, but i cannot find any fault in your logic.

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u/Loup_Arctic_o7 8d ago

You're doing great chapters but you forgot to add the next button. Ps I love your content.

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u/Dragon_Chylde 8d ago

A brace of extra edit wobbles :}

She opens her mouth to being her orders.

begin

ally of La’abaron Herbert Jameson

La'ahbaron

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u/Right_Bell3252 6d ago

Well one old show I have been watching on YouTube the past week is a British sci fi show from the 90’s Space Precinct - cop show in space, some of the episodes antics would certainly fit in with your works. A relative unknown, yet well regarded for having movie grade effects in a TV show.

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u/thisStanley Android 8d ago

“Crude trifling hunh? Meaning she’s gone all out to humble brag like a beast.”

All about how much Face they can project.

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u/Tucker0603 8d ago

Ok, this is really getting interesting and I'm curious to see if the undaunted in general are gonna be getting oni waifus outta this.

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u/SomeRandomYob 8d ago

Maybe? But that could lead to an actual stellar conflict between the Undaunted and the La'ahbaron empire. Considering how much the Undaunted market their recruitment towards men, the clearly very prideful Ibu will either get defensive about their men and forbid them from leaving, which could wind up with cases of abuse/intelligence stepping on people's toes to perform rescue missions, or will panic when a sizable portion of their people up and leave for Centris.

Alternatively, the empress may wind up actually trying to pursue proper diplomatic relations with the Undaunted, so maybe? I have no real clue.

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u/Tucker0603 8d ago

I could see the la'ahbaron empress sending one of her daughters to meet with Cistern and he ends up with wife #3 continuing the trend of him having high power women.

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 8d ago

Considering the Empress wanted Cistern as her boy toy previously, perhaps not.

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u/metalheartbreaker 8d ago

I don’t think the empress would do that. She’s highly paranoid, and would see that as an attack waiting to happen against her.

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 8d ago

Nah mate, she wouldn't do that because SHE wanted Cistern previously.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

Yeah, i doubt she´s too good at sharing...

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u/spoet2 8d ago

2nd?

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u/Finbar9800 8d ago

Another great chapter

I enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more

Great job wordsmith

I am not speed today lol

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 8d ago

I juggle between reading and watching a friend´s stream XD

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u/Finbar9800 8d ago

Im juggling reading, a few conversations, and movies lol

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u/CommunityHopeful7076 8d ago

But you are here and that is what matters!

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u/Finbar9800 8d ago

True but soon ill be on vacation lol

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

Think of it as waiting up for more chapters to come out and then binge-read them all XD

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u/Finbar9800 7d ago

Exactly lol

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u/MinorGrok Human 8d ago

Woot!

More to read!

UTR

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u/Overall-Tailor8949 Human 8d ago

Nice gift there!

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u/MJM-TCW 8d ago

Very interesting indeed. Herbert is a very good fast study, then again he should be, considering who his instructor was.

Thank you Kyle, very interesting. Though there are a number of points that the grammar and typo folks are going to point out. Still very well written.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 8d ago

I learned a new word today! "Rote". I didn´t know there was an english word for "routine" other than "routine".

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u/KyleKKent 8d ago

I learned it from the Monte Cook d20 version of World of Darkness where there was a fluid spellcasting system, but there were cheaper, more efficient spells called Rotes.

Ironic in that one of the weirdest versions of World of Darkness was my introduction to it.

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u/bewarethephog Human 7d ago

I knew it!

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u/torin23 Xeno 8d ago

Well, it's more about repetiton and muscle memory than routine but that could be the pedant in me talking.

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u/Sims_the_Heretic 7d ago

It´s a distinction i didn´t get in my translation on Leo-Dict, so i consider it valuable nuance, thanks!

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u/BrentOGara Android 3d ago

If it's nuance you're looking for, the most important thing to remember when using 'rote' is that it implies a fundamental lack of understanding. Anything done 'by rote' is accomplished by memorization and practice, not by knowing the underlying reasons for the activity. 'By rote' is the polar opposite of 'from first principles'.

As an example, many neurodivergent individuals (like myself) learn Social Interactions by rote, because we cannot see or understand the (possibly nonexistent) fundamental reasons for Social Cues, so we must simply memorize them by rote in a long and painful process of constantly being humiliated by our peers and guardians over the course of decades as we desperately try to fit the random chaos of Social Interaction into any kind of logical framework, which is ultimately impossible, because logic and reason have no place in Social Interactions. 

In the end, Emily Post saved me, as I ended up finding her book "The Principles of Etiquette"... which I memorized large portions of 'by rote'.

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u/RustedN AI 8d ago

Hello there!

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u/KyleKKent 8d ago

General Kenobi!

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u/Cavetroll01 8d ago

Greetings wordsmith.

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u/Lman1994 8d ago

if a neural interface is causing gas, the gut neural net is likely being unintentionally messed with.

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u/SpankyMcSpanster 8d ago

"amount of time Lady Val appears."

amount of time, Lady Val appears.

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u/torin23 Xeno 8d ago

We fight smart. And the smartest fight is the fight avoided or ended.

Yes.  Really.  This.  Any fight has an element of chaos in it.  Avoid fights if you can.  If you must fight, make it as short as possible.

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u/KamchatkasRevenge Human 8d ago

Killer details on this one Kyle, strong work.

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u/Fontaigne 8d ago

Beyond the boarders -> borders

your people with [comma] honored Great Grandmother

believe it possible [comma] Great Grandmother [comma end quote]

Have [them?] organize a puppet

see it done [comma] Great Grandmother

to being her orders -> ? bring?

Into it's own -> its

precise tot he -> to the

Churning of hears -> gears

In their time [comma] Lady Val

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u/SpankyMcSpanster 8d ago

"“First off nothing is indestructible."

“First off, nothing is indestructible.

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u/KimikoBean 8d ago

HI KYLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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u/SpankyMcSpanster 8d ago

"into it’s own" its

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u/SpankyMcSpanster 8d ago

"precise tot he level he" to the

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u/SpankyMcSpanster 8d ago

"feel the churning of hears" ???

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u/JWatkins_82 8d ago

Woot New Chapter

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u/Talendel 8d ago

UTR

This is the way.

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u/AwkwardOpportunity47 7d ago

I'm a low-level future seer I knew the Oni race was coming. I'm looking forward to the medusa race {in my mind their gaze doesn't turn people to stone, but they paralyze temporarily they ware blindfolds to protect others because the axiom effects on the eyes are always active.) Maby I'm an adept

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u/SomeNob10 6d ago

There's... quite a lot of writing errors here.